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How it's hard - to make hurt for those
Who's so dear for You and so close.
How it's hard - as if thrust the knife
In the heart You love more than life.
But what's better - to make this hurt
And to wound Your dearling's heart,
Or to build with Your pain dark walls
That will slowly destroy Your souls?
Who's so dear for You and so close.
How it's hard - as if thrust the knife
In the heart You love more than life.
But what's better - to make this hurt
And to wound Your dearling's heart,
Or to build with Your pain dark walls
That will slowly destroy Your souls?
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Sometimes people we love don't understand that they hurt us by something they do, and we try to "open their eyes" on that. If to show HOW they hurt us, it would bring them some pain, maybe a lot - that's what "thrust the knife" mean. But if to suppress all offences and try to be a "no problem" person - it is far worse than first, because suppressing becomes an accumulation, and accumulated offences becomes "A BOMB" that will certainly blow up some day.
Of course, it is impossible - to not make anyone wounded, telling that person about the pain he (or she) brought to You, but there is always some happy medium that we all should reach.
Of course, it is impossible - to not make anyone wounded, telling that person about the pain he (or she) brought to You, but there is always some happy medium that we all should reach.
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I can't deny that you're very good as a poet for getting the emotions and meaning of this poem through. And you certainly did. 